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February 15, 2012
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When you look at me I lose my breath
My sense of time dissolves away
I can't help what you do to me
I can't control it, this feeling...
This feeling that you've given me
It's precious, each and every day
Please understand what I mean
The world...that's what you mean to me
My life...that's what I'd give for you
I want you to be happy, I want to see you smile
Smile for me, will you? Won't you, please?
Just one smile will melt away the world
Just to know you're happy is perfect
I can't express myself enough
You'll never truly know how I feel
I love you, I love you so much
If I could find a way to express it to you
If something would suffice for me
If something could express my feelings
I'd tell you a thousand times and more
I love you, I love you so much it hurts
I'll say it as many times as it takes
As many times as you want me to
This feeling has taken over me
I can't ignore it anymore, I can't
It's nothing bad, I'm glad it happened
My life is better off now that you're in it
I hope the feeling is the same for you
You've told me so many times before
I'll believe it when you tell me so...
I'll say it to you, I'll let you know somehow
I love you now more so than before
I love you now more than I thought possible
I love you for you, I love you as you are
Creative Writing assignment for #0Dark-Academy0

Akire: I feel cliche to use the words I used here .////_////.'s how I feel <///_///< ...I can't help it >///___///<
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woody21 Oct 28, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
:heart:   Great stuff going on here. Very genuine. 
akireminamino Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, thank you~ :icononiononionplz:
woody21 Nov 13, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
you are very welcome, I dont often look at to many of the literary works here on deviant art, but yours caught my eye. keep writing, good things will follow. 
gymnosophist Feb 16, 2012  Professional Writer
:XD: :D :heart:
akireminamino Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
gymnosophist Feb 17, 2012  Professional Writer
:hug: :heart:
akireminamino Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaw, thank you:iconloveloveplz:
Aurantiaca-Caelum Feb 15, 2012
Awww such a lovely poem :) hehe well done!
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